Hi there. First let me say that this comic’s ad of the dragon with the book and the technology meeting magic had caught my eye rather well. I’m going to continue reading wherever this goes. Now with that stated please don’t take what comes next as a sign of disrespect or anything of the sort ^^
Your body proportions and delivery of humor so far is good and has kept my interest. But your faces need a bit of work. I understand that this seems to be in the anime style but the eyes are a bit wide and at some angles a bot close together. Also to add more impact to the punch show the face conforming a bit to the face and maybe a few dash lines.
wow, he doubles as a pussy AND a doormat!
And a pincushion.
Hi there. First let me say that this comic’s ad of the dragon with the book and the technology meeting magic had caught my eye rather well. I’m going to continue reading wherever this goes. Now with that stated please don’t take what comes next as a sign of disrespect or anything of the sort ^^
Your body proportions and delivery of humor so far is good and has kept my interest. But your faces need a bit of work. I understand that this seems to be in the anime style but the eyes are a bit wide and at some angles a bot close together. Also to add more impact to the punch show the face conforming a bit to the face and maybe a few dash lines.
That’s all really. ^^